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【题型特点】
短文改错属于英语写作的考查范畴。试题给出一篇约100个单词的短文,文中有10处错误,错误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等,要求考生对每个句子进行判断,如有错即将其改正。
该题型考查考生的阅读理解能力,运用所学语言知识发现、判断、改正错误的能力及考生在词法、句法、惯用法和行文逻辑等方面灵活运用语言知识的能力。
命题形式涉及错词、多词和少词,比例一般为8:1:1。
【失分原因】
(1)基础语法掌握不牢,缺乏感知语言正误的能力,发现不了错误。
(2)不了解语言表达的多样性,把原本正确的地方改错。
(3)对常用句式积累不够。
(4)句子结构分析能力欠缺。
(5)答题不规范,不按做题指令答题,改错符号不正确,直接在题的上方写答案。
【解题策略】
1. 看结构,查成分 清楚英语句子的基本句型,根据句型查看句子成分是否齐全及主谓宾是否有误。
2. 分析句子结构 一看主谓关系,查谓语动词单复数及动词语态是否正确;二看动作与时间的关系,查时态是否正确;三看动宾关系,查动词后面是否需要带介词;四看主语与表语的关系,查表语是否正确说明了主语;五看作非谓语的动词与其逻辑主语的关系,查非谓语动词形式是否正确;六看名词单复数是否正确;七看动副关系,查动词的修饰语是否为副词。
3. 看语意,查搭配 根据句子意思,一查“介词+名词”中介词是否正确;二查“动词+介词/副词”中介词或副词是否正确;三查代词的数和格是否正确;四查冠词是否正确。
4. 看修饰语,查逻辑 如“In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday...”,其中的birthday意为“生日”,其前用序数词eighteenth才指十八岁生日。
5. 看逻辑,查连接 句子之间用连接词表达一定的逻辑关系,然而短文中常出现连接词用错、逻辑不通的情况,主要体现在:知识性错误,如连接词误用;介词(in,except除外)后面一般不接that从句,though/although不与but连用,because不与so连用等。
【技巧点拨】
1.对全文的宏观把握
把改错内容当作一篇小短文来理解,这样能对短文有个宏观把握,对上下文有全面的了解。在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读,分析判断,上下兼顾,把明显的、拿的准的题先做完,这样可以缩小包围圈,也有助于对全文的进一步理解。
2. 注意十大常见错误
短文改错是有一定的规律可循的,观察近几年的高考试题以及同学们平常的各种考试,可以发现短文改错主要有以下十大错误:
(1) 形容词与副词的误用。如exciting与excited,hard与hardly,possible与possibly,here与there等,以及形容词与副词的比较级与最高级。
(2) 名词的单复数误用。如在several,many,various,different,a few,one of等之后,常用名词的复数,在every与each之后常用单数。
(3) 代词的误用。如you与your,it’s与its,it与they或them,one与ones,宾格(如me)与反身代词(如myself)等的误用。
(4) 介词的误用、缺少或多余。常见的如in 与on,to与for,instead与instead of,because与because of等的误用。
(5) 时态的错误。一篇文章,要有一种大局观,看看上下文的时态是否一致。
(6) 连词的误用。如or与and的误用,and与but的误用,so与but的误用,because或since与so连用,though与but连用等。
(7) 第三人称单数后的动词形式。
(8) 一些固定结构的误用。如so...that被误用作very...that,too...to被误用very...to,as...as被误作so...as等。
(9) 定语从句中关系词的误用。
(10) 一些常用词的误用。如what与how,except与besides,any与some以及它们的合成词如anything与something,anywhere与somewhere等混淆不清。
【实战训练】
一、单句改错
➢ 多词
1. Please help with me and give me some advice.
2. From then on, I started to play my football with classmates after school.
3. One was that I was amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.
4. I want my cafe to have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”.
5. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two
years.
6. As a kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watch them, my parents would not to let me.
7. I was afraid that to speak in front of a large group of people.
8. I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.
9. They have also bought for some gardening tools.
10. When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies.
11. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.
12. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself.
13. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very serious problem.
14. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping.
15. It can give you some interesting things to appreciate it even though you can’t understand what the actors sing.
➢ 少词
1. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal and decided to be a doctor.
2. During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.
3. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity.
4. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
5. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time.
6. When summer comes, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables.
7. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents.
8. Suddenly I stopped by a woman on the side walk.
9. Last week you visited my school, and on the last day of your tour a farewell party held at the Students’ Centre.
10. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties.
11. Having done all this, we saw a pleasant community than before.
12. Life like a beautiful boat and love is the wind.
13. They bought a kite which they liked very much and then the family went to the suburbs Chris enjoyed himself flying the kite.
14. I do think it is a good idea that lights up our life and make the world better place to live.
15. It will be nice experience for you at least.
➢ 错词
1. Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do.
2. They were two reasons for the decision.
3. In the cafe , customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment that is created for them.
4. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more.
5. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road.
6. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders,
so once I started the car, my mind went blank.
7. When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night.
8. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school.
9. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
10. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his or her paragraph aloud.
11. It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin.
12. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.
13. Around me in the picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time.
14. We can chose between staying at home and taking a trip.
15. Now I am leaving home to college, and I’ll be on my own.
二、短文改错
Passage 1
(2021·江西上饶市·高三一模)
I’m a senior 3 student from China. Now I’m here to expressed my thanks to you on behalf my school and myself.
I have been studying as a exchange student in my school for a month. The past month has been a wonderful time, during that I have made many friends and learned a lot about American culture. Not only my speaking English, but also my ability to live independent has improved a lot. Thanks for your treatment or the service you offered. Finally, I warmly welcomed you to visit my school. I will be very much glad to be your guide at that time. That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
Passage 2
(2021·贵州贵阳市·清华中学高三月考)
Dear schoolmates,
It is known to us, we can benefit a lot from learning English well when having a good knowledge of English mean more opportunities in the future. Therefore, some of us don’t have much interest in English. One of the causes may be what these students have a poor foundation in English. They sometime find it hard to follow the teachers. In my view, fit into the class, we need to have a good
command of English words and grammar. You can listen to an English songs or watch English movies to build up your vocabulary. Besides, try to prepare for lessons before classes and going over what you’re told regular.
Best wishes to all of you!
Passage 3
(2021·四川成都市·高三月考)
Are students’ grades matter of personal privacy? Should test scores be made public?
Opinions vary from person to person. I think it’s good to recognize for the top scorers — they will be inspired and keep try to maintain their high grades. There are some disadvantages, therefore, for the low performers. But competition is a life skill that need to be learned to be successful in the really world. The earlier, the best. Regardless of the type of competition, it will keep them motivating. It is not just about winning or losing, but it is also about when they get involved, enjoy the process and improve them.
Passage 4
(河北省衡水中学2021届高三七调)
Today I was glad to participate in an activity, which theme is Chinese weaving
art, making me to have a taste of traditional Chinese culture deeply.
This activity held in my school library where I appreciated numerous art works, ranging from chairs to decoration. In addition, I was lucky enough to get a opportunity to learn what to weave Chinese knotting on the spot. During that time I was very enjoyable that I fell in love with the magical work immediate.
As far as I am concerned, not only do such activity make me further feel the beauty of the weaving art, but also it is beneficial to arise people’s aware of carrying forward traditional Chinese culture.
Passage 5
(2021届河北省衡水中学全国高三下学期第二次联合考试)
I’m writing to tell you our plan to visit to Mount Huangshan. I’d be very happy to accompany you to go here.
Mount Huangshan, locating in southern Anhui Province, famous for its fantastic scenery. Mount Huangshan has more famous scenic attractions than many another mountains in China. It is especial well known for the beautifully-shaped pine tree, clouds and rocks. The hot springs , that come out from deep underground, are suitable to bathe in and even to drink.
As it was often cloudy and rainy on the mountain, it would be better to bring a
raincoat and wear the suitable pair of shoes. Let’s meet at 7:40 at the school gate this Saturday morning. Looking forward to seeing you.
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