一、初中英语书面表达
1．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
你看过中央电视台董卿主持的节目《朗读者》吗？这是一档非常受欢迎的节目，让我们看到生活中读书的美好、读书的重要。请根据下面表格中所列的要点，以“Growing Up with Reading”为题写一篇短文。
要求：1．语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2．短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；
3．词数80词左右；文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
2．（·湖北中考模拟）学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下提示，并结合自己的观点，以＂How Can We Protect Ourselves?＂为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护（self-protection）。 提示：1. never swim alone; 2. be careful to make friends;
3. call the police when you are in danger; 4. eat healthy food;
5. don’t crowd（go upstairs and downstairs）.
要求：1. 句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。
How Can We Protect Ourselves?
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3．（·四川中考模拟） 书面表达
在你的成长过程中,许多人、许多事物一直在陪伴着你、支持着你、温暖着你,让你感动、伴你成长。请以“Say thanks to________”为题,写一篇短文。 要求: 1. 写出要感谢的对象、原因及感激语言； 2.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯; 3.词数70左右,书写工整、规范; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Say thanks to my teachers
How time flies! My junior high school lives will come to end.
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4．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，即将结束在美国的交换学习，回国前你想给住家妈妈Sarah写封感谢信，告诉她你什么时候回国，为什么感谢她，以及你的感受。 提示词语： help, care, communicate, drive to hospital, own family 提示要点：When are you going to leave? Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her? How do you feel? Dear Sarah,
I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well. Yours, Li Hua
5．（·北京中考模拟）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去中国科技博物馆参观。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加。请用英语写一封邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。
提示词语: school gate, 8:00, invention, experiment, knowledge, notebook, food and drink 提示问题:When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there?
What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit? Dear Peter, How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my
class.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
6．（·广东中考模拟）随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括： 1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？ 2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？
3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？
要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, 7．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达。
为了创建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。
倡导低碳 保护环境 礼貌待人 帮助他人 骑自行车或步行上学，注意节约…… 爱护花草，不乱扔垃圾…… 常说“谢谢”、“ 对不起”、“ 请”等礼貌语言…… 助人为乐，积极参加志愿者活动…… 要求： 1.词数100个左右。
2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. First, we should choose to live a low-carbon life. ______________________________. Second,________________________________________________________________. Third,_________________________________________________________________. Finally,________________________________________________________________. We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful! 8．（·山东中考模拟） 书面表达
你的的笔友Tom居住在北京，请根据表格中提供的信息，介绍一下他的情况。（80词左右） 时间 旅游 喜好 工作情况 梦想 来到中国已经两年了，在北京工作。 曾经去过长城，故宫等名胜。 过去喜欢看科幻小说，现在对中国古典书籍很感兴趣，已经读完了2本名著。 早晨8点起床，乘坐地铁去上班，空余时间练习汉语。 去很多不同的地方，了解中国文化，品尝中国美食。 I have a pen friend named Tom.
9．（·山西中考模拟）书面表达请将作文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
在家庭生活中，我们会做很多关于我们青少年的决定，比如该买什么新年衣服，该怎样庆祝生日，该上哪所学校等。你认为在我们自己的事情上应该自己做决定，还是听从家长的意见？针对这一话题，九年级七班的同学们展开了辩论。
假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自身的亲身经历，说出2至3条理由．．．．．．．来支持你的观点。（只能选择一方观点表达。）
要求：1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
10．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
无锡被评为内地最宜居城市。假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你根据讨论主题并结合所给信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”为题写一份发言稿，号召广大学生为建设美好城市作贡献。内容提示如下：
1．政府修建了很多新路、大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩； 3．私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题； 4．城市变化有利有弊； 5．你的希望：…… 注意事项：
1．发言稿须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第5个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥； 3．词数90左右，发言稿的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4．发言稿内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．
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在中国历史上，书籍一直传承着人类的文明。然而随着互联网的发展，国民尤其是青少年对网络游戏的痴迷，使得阅读渐渐地退出中学生的生活。就“如何在学生中开展阅读活动”, 请根据以下提示写一篇英语小短文。 提示：1.读书的好处。
2.如何开展读书活动：①在图书馆阅读。 ②在班级建立图书角。 ③同学间互借。 ④计划阅读时间及阅读量。 3.你的观点…….
要求：（1）词数：80词左右。
（2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。 （3）文章内容可适当发挥。 How to Have Reading Activities
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12．（·北京中考模拟）我区正在全力创建全国文明城区。假如你是李华，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加下周日学校组织的志愿活动。请用英语写一封邀请函，告诉他活动的时间和地点，活动内容以及需要做什么准备。
提示词语： Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, gloves, shoes 提示问题：When and where will you go? What will you do in this activity?
What do you advise Peter to prepare for this activity?
Dear Peter, How is it going?
I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua Dear Peter, How is it going?
I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
13．（·河北中考模拟）书面表达
假如你叫李华,你的笔友Peter 想了解你日常生活中的榜样｡ 请你以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”为主题,根据下列提示给他写一封邮件｡ 提示:1. Who is your role model in your daily life? 2. Why do you consider him/ her as your role model? 3. How do you feel to have him/ her as your role model? 注意:1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名,校名和地名;
3. 词数:80个左右｡（开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数） To: Peter From: Li Hua
Subject: A Role Model in My Daily Life Hi! Peter,
How is it going? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, Anything new at your school? Yours, Li Hua
14．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆发，据报道114个美国孩子在今年2月死于流感。流感季节我们应该如何保持健康呢？ 易患病人群 老人和孩子 1. 免疫系统弱； 原因 2. 流感知识缺乏：流感病毒引起流感；口、鼻、手传播； 公共场所人与人近距离传播； 3. …… （至少1点） 1. 多锻炼； 预防措施 2. 注意保暖； 3. …… （至少1点） 要求:1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，并适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
参考词汇：weaker immune systems （较弱的免疫系统）；influenza virus （流感病毒） The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially
bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February.
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15．（·全国中考模拟）假如你校正在开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议，号召大家参与此项活动。
1. 没有阅读的习惯，不知道读什么。 阅读现状 2. 作业太多，没有足够的时间阅读。 3. 宁愿把空闲时间花在电脑游戏上。 你的情况 你的想法 热爱阅读，学校阅读俱乐部的成员。从阅读中获得了很多知识。自去年9月以来，已看了10多本书。 …… 注意事项：
1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.在“你的想法”一栏中须围绕主题，用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3.词数在90个左右，短文的开头和结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4.短文内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear friends,
Reading is very important in our daily life. Come on, everyone! Let’s start reading now!
16．（·全国中考模拟）三年的初中生活接近尾声，回首过去你充满依恋，展望未来你豪情满怀。请以The happy life为题写一篇90词左右的短文。要点如下：
1. 校园生活丰富多彩，在宽敞明亮的教室里学习，老师和同学们都很友好，相处融洽，同学们互相帮助，互相学习，虽然作业多，但一起学习很快乐。课余还经常一起打球唱歌。 2. 希望将来从事一份喜欢的工作，和父母分享成功，也为社会（society）多做有意义的事情。
3. 现在必须努力学习，使梦想成真。 17．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达
假设你是刘莉，你的美国笔友Amy来信想了解中国的传统节日端午节。请你回信给她介绍端午节。
历史： 日期： 庆祝活动 The Dragon Boat Festival 特色食品 目的 两千多年 每年农历五月初五 赛龙舟，包粽子（用粽子叶包着糯米，肉，豆） 粽子 纪念屈原 很好的传统节日，提醒我们回顾历史，纪念名人，也给我们一个和家人团聚的节日。 你的感受 参考词汇：农历：Chinese Lunar calendar 糯米:sticky rice Dear Amy,
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18．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。
老师 在校 学生 作业 周末 其它活动 愿望 …… （发挥一到两点） 锻炼，电视 …… （至少发挥两点） 作业多．舍弃爱好 工作认真负责，充满爱心 要求：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥： 2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
19．（·湖南省岳阳开发区长岭中学中考模拟）书面表达。
现在提倡全民阅读，某英语网站正在举办以”reading”为题的英语征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，向该网站投稿。 提示：1.读书有哪些好处？ 2.中学生可以读哪些书？ 3.你的读书计划是什么？ 要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。 Reading
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要求：内容完整；书写规范；语法准确；语句通顺连贯。
参考词：stress（压力），nervous，sleep，time，healthy，smile，sports，help
How to solve our stress
The entrance examination is coming. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives these
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一、初中英语书面表达
1．Have you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, a
解析：Have you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, and it makes us find the beauty and the importance about reading in our life. Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading makes us confident and happy. Read good books. Proper books that can improve ourselves are better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading. Keep a love for reading. However, some of us spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time. I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more and develop a reading habit.
Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading become a part of our life! 【解析】试题分析：本文是材料作文，也是话题作文，话题是“读书伴我成长”，以“Growing Up with Reading（读书伴我成长）”为题写一篇短文。根据内容提示可知本文使用的时态有一般现在时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲，本文给词的要点就是提纲，把要点中的重要短语翻译成英文：the beauty and the importance/ get knowledge/ open our minds/ makes us confident and happy/ proper books that can improve ourselves/ read in a right way/ think about more/ spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time/ develop a reading habit./ Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading become a part of our life!；（二）根据提纲连词成句，连句成篇，注意连词的使用。（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。
点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。
2．How Can We Protect Ourselves?
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. Bu
解析：How Can We Protect Ourselves?
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone. In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 【解析】这篇作文要求我们以How can we protect ourselves为题，谈一谈青少年在日常生活中应该如何保护自己。这是一篇话题作文，文章中只给出了写作的题目，而未给出具体的内容，因此首先学生们应结合自己的日常生活，发挥想象力，先列出文章具体内容的提纲，然后根据题纲来组织语言，最后成文。这样的题目是有点难度的，但也一定程度上放开了学生的思维，学生们可以根据自己所想来写作，而不用受到内容的限制。写之前，要注意确定文章应使用的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇作文应以第一人称we为主，一般现在时态来叙述。注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，以主谓宾和主系表的结构为基础，写出正确的句子，然后为提升文章档次，使用几个较复杂的句型，如复合句、非谓语动词、被动结构等等。还应注意语句之间的连接，使用一些短语、副词等，使整篇文章意思连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容符合题目要求，并且内容充实、完整，表达清楚、明了。作者从三个方面讲述了自己的看法，这几个方面都非常符合实际，所提建议很合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态、第一人称为主，语法规范、准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.两句话中使用了状语从句；再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 中非谓语动词的使用。文章各部分之间使用了较好的连接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，这些词汇和短语的使用让文章具有连贯性。
3．Say thanks to my teachers
How time flies! My junior high school lives will come to end. In the past
解析：Say thanks to my teachers
How time flies! My junior high school lives will come to end.
In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to comfort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
【解析】 话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
4．Dear Sarah,
I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday mornin
解析：Dear Sarah,
I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well.
Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”
Thanks again for taking care of me so well. 【解析】
此文为提纲式作文，文章属于感谢信。文章可分为三段，第一段表明写信的目的；第二段分析感谢的具体原因；第三段写出你在住家妈妈Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人称来写，时态主要用一般过去时和一般将来时。
亮点分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well. [高分句型一]
I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English. 我永远不会忘记，当我用英语和别人交流困难时，你主动提出帮助我。句子中有when引导的时间状语从句。 [高分句型二]
Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您们家里就像住在我自己的家里一样，这让我想起了一句话：“天下之大, 家最美好。” 其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引导的定语从句。
5．Dear Peter, How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museu
解析：Dear Peter, How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my class. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to China Science and Technology Museum together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only do some experiments but also watch some wonderful inventions. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You’d better take some food and drinks with you. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇给材料作文，要求就学校准备组织学生本周五去中国科技博物馆参观
的事情，写一封邮件，邀请交换生Peter参加。要注意邮件的写作格式，根据题目要求可判断文章时态应用一般将来时和一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称和第二人称。写作要点包括：活动的时间、地点、活动内容，以及参观时需要准备什么。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。 点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
6．As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer t
解析：As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.
Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones. 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。 【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
7．In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. Firs
解析：In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot.
When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need. Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.
Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.
Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work. We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写出中学生应从表格中的几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中had better，by bike, on foot，instead of, pay attention to, as often as possible ，take care of, devote … to …, learn from 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中使用了固定句型It’s +形容词+for sb. +to do sth., 以及定语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。
8．I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing.
解析：I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 a.m. and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.
【解析】试题分析：本文是材料作文。你的的笔友Tom居住在北京，请根据表格中提供的信息，介绍一下他的情况。根据内容可知本文使用的时态有一般现在时，一般过去式和现在完成时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲：1. 来到中国已经两年了，在北京工作。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing.2. 曾经去过长城，故宫等名胜。He has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest.3. 过去喜欢看科幻小说，现在对中国古典书籍很感兴趣，已经读完了2本名著。He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics.4. 早晨8点起床，乘坐地铁去上班，空余时间练习汉语。He gets up at 8 a.m. and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time.5. 去很多不同的地方，了解中国文化，品尝中国美食。He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food.（二）根据提纲连词成句，连句成篇，注意连词的使用。（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，
检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。 点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。
9．One possible version：
At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make ou
解析：One possible version：
At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.
After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.
There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇议论文，论点是：在我们自己的事情上，我们应该自己做决定，还是由家长来做决定。关于这个话题每个人都会有自己的看法，题目要求我们任选一个观点来讲述，并结合自己的亲身经历，给出2到3个理由。写作之前，我们应先从正方和反方中选择一个，作为自己的观点，然后围绕这一观点阐述自己的理由。这是一篇话题作文，题目中并没有给我们规定具体的写作内容，我们应发挥自己的想象力，结合自己的日常生活来组织语言，丰富文章的内容。写作时还应注意的是语言的表达，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，我们不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译，而是从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型，多用简单句，如主谓宾、主系表的结构，点缀几个复合句或并列句，调整文章节奏，让文章的句子富于变化，有新鲜感。高级句型或词汇的使用也可以提升文章的档次，在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意表达连贯、流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，观点明确，结构合理。短文作者选择了正方的观点，第一句话先点明自己的观点是什么，接下来围绕这一观点进行阐述，并从自己的经历出发，阐述了自己持有这一观点的理由，充分、合理，有说服力。最后一段作者重申自己的观点，并进行了总结。其次短文中使用了正确的时态、人称，文章以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。句式表达符合英语的表达习惯，简单句为主，也使用了较多的复合句和高级句型，如状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等。有些句子较长，是由于使用高级句型所致，一味使用较长的句子也会导致文章的冗长，让读者感觉比较累，因此要注意调整文章的节奏。短文中较好的句型和
短语有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things.等。
10．Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has
解析：Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如in the past few years，lots of，a number of，open parks，have a picnic，have fun，on weekends and holidays，more and more，both …and，deal with the problem，in the future等。而More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.等多种more and more句式结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。
点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用现在完成时和一般现在时，可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们拓展成一个个英文句子。还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。
11．How to Have Reading Activities
As we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only ma
解析：How to Have Reading Activities
As we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only makes us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves. I have some good advice about how to have reading activities. First, we can read in our school library. There are all kinds of books there. It's a good place to read. Second, we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class. Third, we can exchange books with one another. It helps develop our cooperation spirit. At last，it's necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books. All in all, we can benefit from colorful reading activities. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，主要内容是围绕由于受到互联网的影响，青少年对阅读渐渐失去兴趣这一现象，就\"如何在学生中开展阅读活动\"，写一篇英语小短文。结合所给的材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象，注意要理顺要点，防止
漏写。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。 提示要点： 1.读书的好处。
2.如何开展读书活动：①在图书馆阅读。 ②在班级建立图书角。 ③同学间互借。 ④计划阅读时间及阅读量。 3.你的观点…….
12．Dear Peter How is it going?
I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volu
解析：Dear Peter How is it going?
I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volunteer for a better environment. We’ll go to the park near our school at 9 o’clock on Sunday morning.
We’ll pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. If you decide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.
I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours Li Hua 【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，写作要点为：1. 志愿者活动的时间和地点。2. 活动中做些什么。3. 建议彼得为这次活动做哪些准备。然后围绕要点适当发挥。结合材料内容，可知时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
13．How is it going ? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, my role model in my daily lif
解析：How is it going ? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, my role model in my daily life is my teacher, Mr. Green. He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. He is patient with all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. He is like a father to us. Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I’m proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up. Anything new at your school? Yours, Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”为主题,给我的笔友Peter 写信，介绍我日常生活中的榜样。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He is……，He teaches us how to……，Mr. Green sets a good example for……，I hope to be……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我日常生活中的榜样是格林先生，接下来介绍为什么格林先生是我的榜样，最后我希望长大后像他一样。此处be friendly to, be patient with, try to do sth, teach sb sth, help sb do sth, be like, set a good example for sb, hope to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
14．The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It
解析：The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February.
The flu hits children and elderly people the hardest. This is because they have weaker immune system. It is easy for them to get the flu.
In fact, most people don’t know much about the flu. The influenza virus causes the flu. The virus can get on your hands. If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu. Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public.
How do we keep the flu away? We should get lots of rest and exercise. Put on enough clothes to keep warm. Take a shower every day and wash hands often. Remember if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如from to，every year，get the flu，in fact，get on，pay no attention to，spread from，person to person，in public，keep away，lots of，put on，take a shower，make sure，go to the hospital，as soon as possible等。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public.等多种从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
15．Dear friends,
Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the readin
解析：Dear friends,
Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the reading habit. They don’t know what to read. Sometimes there is too much homework to do, so they don’t have time to read. What’s worse, they would rather spend their free time on computer games. I love
reading and I’m in the school Reading Club. I got a lot of knowledge through reading. I have read over ten books since last September. I think reading helps open up a whole new world to us. I’m sure reading will be popular as time goes on! Come on, Everyone! Let’s start reading now!
【解析】 这是一篇图表，你校正在开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议，号召大家参与此项活动。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
the reading habit阅读习惯；spend their free time on computer games把空闲时间花在电脑游戏上；
16．The happy life
My school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom
解析：The happy life
My school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom with our lovely classmates. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful. We get on well with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. Though sometimes there is too much homework, with their help, we always finish it happily. During our free time, We play ball games and sing songs together.
I wish to have a job I like and I will share my success with my parents. I also hope that I can do a lot of meaningful work for the society in the future. At present, I must study hard to make my dream come true.
【解析】英语作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
get on well with相处融洽；help each other and learn from each other互相帮助，互相学习； with one’s help在某人的帮助下；in the future. 在未来；come true.（梦想）成真
17．Dear Amy,
I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional fe
解析：Dear Amy,
I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival. I ‘m happy to share what I know about it with you.
The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.
In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on
history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍中国的传统节日端午节。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I learn from your letter that……，I’m happy to……，The festival has a history of……，These two are……，we all love……，I hope that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表达了我很高兴向你介绍端午节，接下来介绍端午节的历史，日期，庆祝活动，特色食物和目的，最后表达我的感受。此处want to do sth, share sth with sb, according to, in a word, look back, get together等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
18．Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Her
解析：Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams. At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
19．Reading plays an important role in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it can als
解析：Reading plays an important role in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it can also help us open our minds. So as middle school students, we should read more. In my opinion, textbooks, newspapers and magazines are all good reading materials. As for me, I plan to read one book every month. Whenever I have free time, I’ll read. As the saying goes, reading makes a full man. Let’s start reading now.
【解析】写作分析：本文需要按照要求以“阅读”为主题写作，要写出读书的好处、中学生可以读的书、你的读书计划。按照要求逐条描述即可，但要注意增添相关细节使得文章连贯。 写作亮点：
总起要对reading做一个概括，用到了“plays an important role”（扮演重要的角色）这一搭配，关于读书的好处提到了：open our minds（开阔思维），relax（放松）。关于可以读的书，介绍了几种文本（textbooks, newspapers and magazine），关于介绍读书计划，描述了自己读书的频率，最后，有引用谚语，也是一个亮点。
20．How to solve our stress?
The entrance examination is coming .We will graduate soon . We all have so
解析：How to solve our stress?
The entrance examination is coming .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?
First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Third, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourth, we should try our best to study hard 。 And we should also learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we had better see a doctor. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以＂How to solve our stress＂为题写一篇短文，谈谈你在生活、学习方面的烦恼和压力，以及要如何面对困难，解决问题的方法。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。根据所给的材料可知本文时态要用一般现在时来写，主语为第一人称，写作时要注意主谓一致的问题。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
参考词：stress （ 压力） , nervous，sleep , time , healthy , smile , sports， help 可以用到的短语有： take part in 参加；
communicate with sb. 和某人交流； try one's best to do sth. 尽全力做某事； too much 太多。
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，抓住重点，理顺要点。草拟提纲，分清各要点之间的内在联系，寻求逻辑次序，分出层次，确定如何下手，
使表达内容条理清楚。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
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