to my beloved boy

To my beloved boy

------Christina My dear boy:

Just one month ago, I was completely another girl. I liked listening sorrowful songs.I preferred writing sad characters. I enjoyed walking on the street alone. I envied all my friends who possess of a beatific love. I even always cried at night without any reason.

Even if I have many bosom friends who always accompany with me when I am in trouble; Even if I know that one day my love will also fall on me , what I can do now is just waiting; Even if I know that one day there must be a boy who tries to listen to all the songs which I like most, who would like to travel all the paths which I have ever taken, who is willing to do all to make me happy. Even if I know one day that all these things will happen, I still feel myself inferior. In my inner heart. I always think that it is just because I am not good enough so that the people who I liked cannot fall in love with me.

Until one day, you really appeared in my world. It seems like a beam of light that illuminates my dim and dark world. Until you appeared, smiling is always on my lips, and merry melody is always around me. I really want to say \"Thank you\"to you, my dear, thank you to lift me out of a self-abased and lonely world, thank you, thank you.

Of course, besides rampant blessings, some friends also said to me that it just because you are in the first flush of love, you are curious about everything involving love, and everything involving love is fresh to you. Maybe after 3 months, you will be in insipid period, you will lose original passion and enthusiasm, you will know that love is nothing more than this. I am very grateful to those friends who remind me of this. I know they just want me to have a mental preparation, and don't be addicted to love too much. However, I still believe that love is when you throw away the feeling, the passion, and the enthusiasm, you still cherish her(him). So I want you know that even if one day, you can not give me any romantic love, and we are just embraced by wateriness; Even if one day, we just walk shoulder by shoulder instead of hand in hand; Even if one day, we are busy in working rather than showing great concern for each other, I belive that as long as we remember that it is love that support us to have been together for so long time, it is love that help us overcome so many difficulties, as long as we remember that, nothing can separate us. In fact, what I want is just a faithful shoulder and a clenched hand, that is enough. And what I can give you now is just a clenched hand and a steadfast heart. No matter what will happen in the future, I would like to be with you. Are you ready to carry on with me ?

Comment

This article is a love letter, the language is beautiful, and the author’s love is sincere. The author’s choice of form is proper and appropriate. It makes the audience feel closer to her. And the author can also express her most genuine emotions to us. In this article, there are many different figures of speech, such as anaphora, transferred epithet, and repetition.

In the first paragraph, she said that she completely became another girl. “I liked listening sorrowful songs. I preferred writing sad characters. I enjoyed walking on the street alone. I envied all my friends who possess of a beatific love. I even always cried at night without any reason.” Those are typical behaviors that girls who fall in one-side love will do. I also experienced that before, and I feel sympathy. I understand the sorrow that a girl will feel when the person who she really loves does not know about it. I understand the loneliness that a girl will feel when she badly wants to be with the person who she really loves. I understand the helplessness that a girl will feel when she does n’t know how to say “I love you” to the person who she really loves. In this article, the author expressed her hope that one day she could be good enough to make the boy who she loves fall in love with her. But in the last paragraph, she said that “In fact, what I want is just a faithful shoulder and a clenched hand, that is enough. And what I can give you now is just a clenched hand and a steadfast heart. No matter what will happen in the future, I would like to be with you.”

Maybe her hope becomes more specific and realistic. Or maybe her hope is not so hard to come true. Anyway, what I can firmly believe is that she has a firm determination to be with him.

Love is patient, love is kind, and is not jealous; love does not brag and is not arrogant, does not act unbecomingly; it does not seek its own, is not provoked, does not take into account a wrong suffered, does not rejoice in unrighteousness. Love is considered the most basic emotion that human awareness can feel; therefore, it is the closest to the source of life. As a sophomore, we can try to find out what is love, and can also try to find the right person for ourselves. I hope the author will find the true love.

Comment by 杨泽西

In this article, I find some rhetoric, such as anaphora, anadiplosis and so on. The anaphora is a popular figure of speech involving the repetition of the same word at the beginning of successive clauses, sentences or verses. And the anaphora often used jointly to gain more emphasis to convey strong emotions. The anadiplosis can be generated in a serious of sentences and ideas either for the sake of aesthetic feeling or to give a sense of logical progression of ideas. It can be used to express strong emotion, like great scourge or pain, heart breaking anger or celestial joy.

The author wrote two articles, they are both to write to someone, the first one is to her brother, to her son. The other is to her boyfriend, her true love. I am very happy with she find her true love in this world. To be her classmate and her best friend, I can see smile on her face everyday, since they get together. We all agree that Christina is a very beautiful girl, she have a kind character, she loves everyone, she can make food. But we all don't know why this girl can't find a person to look after her. And now this person is come here to find you and gives all his heart to you. I am very happy for this.

Comment by Dear Christina:

I can feel your happiness and excitement while I reading this sweet letter. Your soulful tone affects me so much. Yes, I can understand you. I can understand your little emotion which mixes joy and slight sadness. It is the emotion of love.

I have ever met a person who brightened my dark world, opened my closed door of heart, and enriched my empty life. It is just like I was born to wait for him. Maybe this statement is a little exaggerated. But it is the special mood belongs to a girl who has been immersed in Love Ocean. I want to say “thank you” to him, I want to talk a lot, and I want to express my eager and excitement to the whole world. Dear Christina, really thank

you to wake up my deep memory of love. Once it was my most precious possession. But I threw it to a dusty corner and never pick it up for some reasons.

It is really an interesting coincidence that both of us write a letter to others. But your letter is to express the sweet evoke feelings of love, and my letter is to express the bitter taste of love. Maybe “sweet” and “bitter” will constitute the intact definition of love.

Actually, I admire your desperate courage of love. I don’t know why I lose it. Perhaps I become realistic. I always think about many other things -which have nothing to do with love, such as his personal development and family background. Perhaps I was hurt by love. I did n’t believe the fairy tales any more. I began to suspect the permanence of love. I am scared to give my heart, and of course I can’t get one in return.

After I read your letter, I begin to think, to memory the throb of the initial love. I want to experience the pure love use my heart and soul again. I want to empty my brain which is occupied by many things in mess. Why I forgot the meaning of love? It is a kind of heroic dream in the exhausted life. It brings us joy and happiness, and wipes our tear. Don’t be afraid, just go ahead.

“Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth.\" My brave girl, I will always bless you.

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if you not to leave, I will not abandon

Just one month ago, I was completely another girl. I liked listening sorrowful songs. I preferred writing sad characters. I enjoyed walking on the street alone. I envied all my friends who possess of a beatific love. I even always cried at night without any reason.

Even if I have many bosom friends who always accompany with me when I am in trouble; Even if I know that one day my love will also fall on me , what I can do now is just waiting; Even if I know that one day there must be a boy who tries to listen to all the songs which I like most, who would like to travel all the paths which I have ever taken, who is willing to do all to make me happy. Even if I know one day that all these things will happen, I still feel myself inferior. In my inner heart, I always thought that it was just because I was not good enough so that the people who I liked cannot fall in love with me.

Until one day, you really appeared in my world. It seems like a beam of light that illuminates my dim and dark world. Until you appeared, smiling is always on my lips; merry melody is always around me. I really want to say \"Thank you\" to you, my dear, thank you to lift me out of a self-abased and lonely world, thank you, thank you.

Of course, besides rampant blessings, some friends also said to me that it just because you are in the first flush of love, you are curious about everything involving love, and everything involving love is fresh to you. Maybe after 3 months, you will be in insipid period, you will lose original passion and enthusiasm, you will know that love is nothing more than this. I am very grateful to those friends who remind me of this. I know they just want me to have a mental preparation, and don't be addicted to love too much. However, I still believe that love is when you throw away the feeling, the passion, and the enthusiasm, you still cherish her(him). I believe love, I believe you.

So I want you know that even if one day, we just walk shoulder to shoulder instead of hand in hand; Even if one day, we are busy in working rather than showing great concern for each other; Even if one day, wateriness penetrates our life every day, and you do not give me romantic love any mor-e; I belive that as long as we remember that it is love that support us to have been together for so long time, it is love that help us overcome so many difficulties, nothing can separate us.

In fact, what I want are just a faithful shoulder and a clenched hand. What I can give you now are just a clenched hand and a steadfast heart. All in all, no matter what will happen in the future, \" if you not to leave, I will not abandon \".