一、北京冬奥
1.(2022·北京东城·高三期末)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim给你发来邮件,提到他申请2022年北京冬奥会志愿者落选,请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示安慰;
2.建议以其它方式关注冬奥会。 注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文 Dear Jim,
I'm really sorry to hear that you didn't make it. It is natural to feel disappointed. However, there is no need to worry, as there are various ways to get involved.
Even if you can't come in person, you can log onto the official website or apps to enjoy live or recorded broadcasts, which allows you to follow the events almost in real time. Also you can find reports on everyday life of the athletes in Beijing.
What's more, the audience are encouraged to share their comments on social media while enjoying the games. I think it might be
interesting to share your thoughts online and meanwhile interact with
both fans and athletes.
I believe you will enjoy yourself, so have fun in a new way! Yours, Li Hua 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回邮件安慰他北京冬奥志愿者落选并建议其它方式让他关注冬奥。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
不同的:various→different 参与:get involved → take part in 而且:What's more→besides
与此同时:meanwhile→at the same time 2.句式拓展 同义句转换
原句:I'm really sorry to hear that you didn't make it. 拓展句:Hearing that you didn’t make it, I am really sorry. 【点睛】
[高分句型1]Even if you can't come in person, you can log onto the official website or apps to enjoy live or recorded broadcasts, which allows you to follow the events almost in real time.(运用了even if引导的让步状语从句;运用which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]What's more, the audience are encouraged to share their comments on social media while enjoying the games.(while引导状语从句使用了省略句)
二、亲子关系
2.(2022·黑龙江·哈尔滨市第三十二中学校高三期末)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom写信告诉你由于他最近迷上电脑游戏而熬夜,忽视学业,并受父母责骂,和父母发生了争吵,心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。 内容包括: 1.表示理解;
2.指出玩手机游戏的危害(至少两点); 3.建议向父母道歉。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文 Dear Tom,
I’ve heard that recently you are obsessed with computer games and your parents are not happy with that because you stay up at night to play computer games and pay less attention to study.
To be honest, what you did is not right thing. I understand you and also think computer games are interesting. However, we are students. Study is our main task. We have to study hard so that we can go to top university and find a decent job in the future. Please don't argue with your parents, since they are just concerned about your health and study. I think you should apologize to them sincerely. You are supposed to focus on your study instead of mobile phone games, which have negative effects on your health. I suggest that you finish your homework first and find a balance between study and entertainment.
I hope that my suggestion can help you. Expecting your good news. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定考生是李华,你的美国笔友Tom写信告诉你由于他最近迷上电脑游戏而熬夜,忽视学业,并受父母责骂,和父母发生了争吵,心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
沉迷于:be addicted to→be obsessed with 对……满意:be satisfied with→be happy with 关心:be worried about→be concerned about 建议:advise→suggest 2.句式拓展 合并简单句
原句:I understand you and also think computer games are interesting. However, we are students.
拓展句:Although I understand you and also think computer games are interesting, we are students. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’ve heard that recently you are obsessed with computer games and your parents are not happy with that because you stay up at night to play computer games and pay less attention to study. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] To be honest, what you did is not right thing. (运用了what引导主语从句)
三、新冠相关 3.
假设你是李华,你的父母在外地辛勤工作,原本约定回家和你一起庆祝春节,却因为当地新冠疫情突发导致封城而不能回家,他们非常内疚。请按以下内容给他们写一封信; 要点:
1、关心、安慰父母; 2、表达感恩之情; 3、送上春节祝福; 要求:100词左右
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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:
Dear father and mother,
You are supposed to come home to celebrate the Spring Festival with me, but you feel very guilty for your absence, because the city was closed due to the outbreak of COVID-19.
I really hope you don't blame yourselves and that you should take care of yourselves. We are delighted to live in a country where the epidemic is under control. I would like to show my gratitude for the love and care given from my childhood. Your love keeps me growing. May your life always be filled with happy times. Happy Spring Festival!
Li Hua 【分析】
这是一篇应用文。假设考生是李华,考生的父母在外地辛勤工作,原本约定回家和你一起庆祝中秋节,却因为当地新冠疫情突发导致封城而不能回家,他们非常内疚。请按以下内容给他们写一封信。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累
庆祝:observe→ celebrate 照顾:look after→ take care of 表达:express→ show 由于:owing to → due to 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句
原句:Your love keeps me growing.
Yours,
拓展句:It’s your love that keeps me growing. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] I really hope you don't blame yourselves and that you should take care of yourselves.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] We are happy to live in a country where the epidemic is under control.(where引导的定语从句)
四、太空探索
4.(2022·重庆·西南大学附中一模)学校英文报征稿:给中国太空站(Tiangong Space Station)宇航员们的一封信。假设你是 李华,准备为学校英文报投稿, 内容包括:
1. 对他们为太空事业做出的成就感到骄傲; 2. 询问太空站上生活、工作情况; 3. 表达关心和祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear astronauts,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】例文: Dear astronauts,
I’m writing with great excitement to tell you how proud I am for your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions.
With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation. Have you adapted to the weightless environment? If you miss your families, is it possible for you to make video calls on a regular basis? Additionally, impressed by your interaction with us students in “Tiangong Class”, I cannot help admiring your pioneering work, wondering what it takes to be a qualified taikonaut. Wish you a successful mission and a comfortable journey!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给中国太空站的宇航员们的一封信,询问太空站上的生活、工作情况,并向他们表达关心和祝愿。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
感到骄傲:take pride in→be proud of
非凡的:remarkable→extraordinary →outstanding →marvelous 成就:achievement→ accomplishment 适应:adjust to→ adapt to
定期地:regularly→ on a regular basis 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation. 拓展句:Because I am curious about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing with great excitement to tell you how proud I am for your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions.(运用了动词不定式作状语,how引导的宾语从句,以及过去分词短语充当后置定语)
【高分句型2】With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation. (运用了with+宾语+宾补的复合结构)
【高分句型3】Additionally, impressed by your interaction with us students in “Tiangong Class”, I cannot help admiring your pioneering work, wondering what it takes to be a qualified taikonaut.(运用了impressed过去分词短语作状语,wandering现在分词短语充当伴随状语以及what引导的宾语从句)
五、双减政策
5.(2021·江西·奉新县第一中学高二阶段练习)“双减”,即有效减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。自从国家正式出台相关文件后引来了各方的关注和讨论。一时间,学生和家长对即将到来轻松的学业反而无所适从。请你根据下面提示,就实施“双减”政策后学生如何规划自己的学习和课余生活写一篇短文。 要求:(1)词数100左右
(2)可以适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It's really a wonderful news that the policy of double-lightening the burden has been carried out. However, students have to deal with the new challenge of making the best of their time after school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
It's really a wonderful news that the policy of double-lightening the burden has been carried out. However, students have to deal with the new challenge of making the best of their time after school.
First of all , make various plans and complete the contents based on the plan alone. For example,read a variety of books, and constantly expand your reading in order to make up for the lack of reading. Besides, develop your new interest in some subjects which are unfamiliar to you. Some new areas will broaden your horizons and increase your knowledge.Last but not least, participate in various sports activities and promote physical and mental health through physical exercise. I think if you want to study better, you should have a good body first.
In a word, the policy of double-lightening the burden can help us plan our life better. 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生就实施“双减”政策后学生如何规划自己的学习和课余生活写一篇短文。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累
参加:take part in → participate in 变阔;变宽:broaden→ enrich
各种各样: all kinds of→ varieties of 总之:in summary→ in a word 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句
原句:Last but not least, participate in various sports activities and promote physical and mental health through physical exercise. 拓展句:Last but not least, participate in various sports activities , promoting physical and mental health through physical exercise. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] Besides, develop your new interest in some subjects which are unfamiliar to you.(which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I think if you want to study better, you should have a good body first.(if引导的条件状语从句)
六、传统文化
6.(2021·天津·耀华中学高三期末)假定你是李华,你正在某国外中学作交换生,该校校报的“外国文化”栏目拟介绍中国传统文化,校报编辑Peter给你写信,咨询你的意见。请你给Peter写封回信,要点如下: 1.你认为最能代表中国文化的是什么?请说明理由; 2.我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化? (至少两点) 3.词数保持在110即可。 Dear Peter,
I am pleased to receive your letter.
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文: Dear Peter,
I am pleased to receive your letter. I’m so happy that the “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper will recommend Chinese traditional culture.
There is no doubt that Confucius is the most representative symbol of Chinese culture. As a philosopher, Confucius not only represents the traditional Chinese culture, but has been influencing us Chinese people since ancient times. Nowadays we can find lots of Confucius institutes around the world, which provides precious opportunities for the foreigners to learn about Chinese culture.
To promote Chinese culture, we are supposed to provide various cultural exchange activities. What’s more, establishing Confucius
institutes all over the world is also a good idea. Meanwhile, attracting more foreign visitors to China to experience Chinese culture will have a far-reaching impact. I’ll be glad if I could help you. Best wishes.
Yours, Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给Peter写封回信向校报的“外国文化”栏目投稿。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:
1.说明最能代表中国文化的是什么?
2.我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化?(至少两点) 第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
look forward to;be pleased to;be pleased to;lots of 第三步:连词成句
1. I am pleased to receive your letter.
2. I’m so happy that the “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper will recommend Chinese traditional culture.
3. There is no doubt that Confucius is the most representative symbol of Chinese culture.
4. As a philosopher, Confucius not only represents the traditional Chinese culture,but has been influencing us Chinese people since ancient times.
5. Nowadays we can find lots of Confucius institutes around the world, which provides precious opportunities for the foreigners to learn about Chinese culture.
6. To promote Chinese culture, we are supposed to provide various cultural exchange activities.
7. What’s more, establishing Confucius institutes all over the world is also a good idea.
8. Meanwhile, attracting more foreign visitors to China to experience Chinese culture will have a far-reaching impact. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second,And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause (从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改 【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句句,如:Nowadays we can find lots of Confucius institutes around the world, which provides precious opportunities for the foreigners to learn about Chinese culture.这句话运用了which引导的定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
七、可持续向未来 7.
2022年北京冬奥会处处体现低碳环保的理念。假定你是校学生会的一员,为了更好地 响应北京冬奥会号召,你发出了关于低碳生活的倡议,并制作了下面的海报。
请根据海报内容写一份100词左右的倡议书(题目已给出,除所给提示外,可适当增加细节)。
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A Proposal: to have low-carbon lifestyle
Dear friends,
Do you want to live in a beautiful world? So it is our responsibility to have a low-carbon lifestyle, which matters more and more in energy saving and environmental protection. To fulfill it, we should bear the following habits in mind. First, it’s important to turn off taps and lights and recycle everything recyclable in our daily life. What’s more, while sticking to the habit of setting the temperature of your air conditioner at above 26℃ in summer and eating fruit and vegetables in season, we should also climb stairs under the fifth floor instead of taking lifts. Let’s all take action now and contribute to the prosperity of our mother—the earth. Thank you! 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于倡议书。要求考生根据海报内容写一份100词左右的关于低碳生活的倡议书。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
对…作贡献:devote to→ contribute to 此外:besides → what’s more 实现:realize→fulfill 坚持:insist on → stick to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:To fulfill it, we should bear the following habits in mind. 拓展句:we should bear the following habits in mind so that we can fulfill it. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】So it is our responsibility to have a low-carbon lifestyle, which matters more and more in energy saving and environmental protection.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】To fulfill it, we should bear the following habits in mind.(运用了动词不定式的形式表目的)
八、学榜样向未来
8.(2021·河南·高三阶段练习)你校即将举行“英语周”系列征文活动,请你以“MyHero/Heroine”为题写一篇短文参赛,内容包括: 1. 对偶像的简要介绍; 2. 偶像的优秀品质。 注意:词数100左右。 【答案】例文:My Heroine
My heroine is Quan Hongchan, a 14-year-old Chinese professional diver from Zhanjiang, Guangdong Province, who won the gold medal at the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games in Tokyo, Japan.
I admire Quan Hongchan for the following reasons. First of all, as a player, she is so devoted to daily practice that she has won several gold medals in diving. Besides, she is a girl of responsibility. Though she doesn't know what disease her mother suffers from, she hopes to do her best to help her recover. Furthermore, she is easy-going and reliable, getting along well with other players. It's no
wonder that she is increasingly popular with people both at home and abroad.
I firmly believe that Quan Hongchan will make greater achievements and I'll try to follow her example. 【分析】
这是一篇说明文。要求考生介绍自己的偶像,包括他/她的优秀品质。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
欣赏:appreciate→admire
致力于:be dedicated to→be devoted to
与某人相处得好:be on good terms with sb.→get along well with sb. 越来越:more and more→increasingly 2.句型拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:I admire Quan Hongchan for the following reasons. 拓展句:The reasons why I admire Quan Hongchan are as follows. 【点睛】
[高分句型1]My heroine is Quan Hongchan, a 14-year-old Chinese professional diver from Zhanjiang, Guangdong Province, who won the gold medal at the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games in Tokyo, Japan.(运用who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Though she doesn't know what disease her mother suffers from, she hopes to do her best to help her recover. (运用though引导让步状语从句,what引导宾语从句)
九、”数字化”撞上”老龄化” 9.
((上海押题)2021届上海市高三英语秋考押题密卷04)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三张华,在某报纸上看到一则报道,寒冬腊月,一名老人因不会使用手机扫描通信大数据行程码,被公交车司机呵斥要求其下车。互联网的发展便利人们生活的同时,却让很多老年人无所适从,就如何让银发族跨越“数字化”鸿沟的问题报社征集现广大读者的建议。请你写一封信给该报。
在信中,你必须:
1. 你对老年人“数字化”鸿沟的看法;
2. 就如何帮助老年人跨越“数字化”鸿沟提出建议。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:To whom it may concern,
Reading the report that a senior citizen was declined from riding bus due to being unable to display his health codes with smartphone, I’m so touched that I’m writing to voice my opinions.
While the majority of the populace enjoys the convenience of digital technologies, however, senior citizens are experiencing greater and greater difficulties with the digital divide. This is rather
disappointing. Measures should be taken to bridge the digital divide for senior citizens.
To begin with, we need to strengthen education and training for senior citizens. Many of them have little knowledge of new technologies. Therefor we’d better hire specialized and patient coaches, select easy-to-understand teaching materials, and help the senior citizens to become literate in technology. Then, we should launch more senior-friendly products. For example, the taxi-hailing platform of Shanghai has enabled “one button hail” and “big letter mode” so that seniors with poor eyesight can send their location information with a single click. More importantly, senior citizens are not passively taking in help from others. We must encourage them to act together, to overcome fear of new technologies, and stick to the belief of “never too old to learn”.
In a nutshell, to help senior citizens bridge the digital divide, we need joint efforts from the governments, companies, and the whole society. Hope that my suggestions would be taken into consideration. Yours, Zhang Hua 【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文,要求考生写一封信给该报就如何让银发族跨越“数字化”鸿沟的问题提出自己的建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
表达我的看法:express my opinions →voice my opinions 不懂:know little of →have little knowledge of 接受帮助:accept help→ take in help
被考虑: be considered→ be taken into consideration 2.句式拓展 合并简单句
原句:To begin with, we need to strengthen education and training for senior citizens. Many of them have little knowledge of new technologies.
拓展句:To begin with, we need to strengthen education and training for senior citizens, many of whom have little knowledge of new technologies. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] Reading the report that a senior citizen was declined from riding bus due to being unable to display his health codes with smartphone, I’m so touched that I’m writing to voice my opinions. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] For example, the taxi-hailing platform of Shanghai has enabled “one button hail” and “big letter mode” so that seniors with poor eyesight can send their location information with a single click. (运用了so that引导的目的状语)
十、北京冬奥与中国元素
10.(2022·重庆一中高三阶段练习)你的英国朋友James看了冬奥会开幕式,对中国的24节气(24 solar terms)很感兴趣,写信向你询问有关中国24节气的相关知识。请你给他写一封回信,介绍相关知识,要点如下: 1. 很高兴他对中国文化感兴趣。
2. 介绍其中一个节气——立春Beginning of Spring 3. 欢迎他亲自来中国感受传统文化。 1. 注意:词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 Dear James,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:Dear James,
I'm so glad that your are interested in Chinese culture. It's my privilege to introduce Chinese 24 solar terms to you.
The traditional Chinese lunar calendar divides the year into 24 solar cycles, instructing the farmers to carry out certain agriculture activities during certain periods of the year. The first of them is Beginning of Spring, which lifts the curtain of spring. After spring sets in, everything comes back to life and is full of vigour. Many of the solar terms have become associated with Chinese customs over the centuries. Beginning of spring is no exception. In many parts of China, people observe the custom of “biting the spring” by eating spring pancakes or spring rolls. Legacy has it that the egg can be set upright on the first day of Beginning of Spring. It is believed that whoever can make the egg stand on that day will have good luck in the year to come.
Welcome to China and experience more Chinese Culture in person. Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友James写封信,介绍中国24节气的相关知识。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted 荣幸:privilege→honor 指导:instruct→guide
开始:beginning→start 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:The traditional Chinese lunar calendar divides the year into 24 solar cycles, instructing the farmers to carry out certain agriculture activities during certain periods of the year.
拓展句:The traditional Chinese lunar calendar divides the year into 24 solar cycles, which instruct the farmers to carry out certain agriculture activities during certain periods of the year. 【点睛】
[高分句型1]The first of them is Beginning of Spring, which lifts the curtain of spring.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It is believed that whoever can make the egg stand on that day will have good luck in the year to come.(运用了that引导的主语从句和it做形式主语)
十一、电动自行车 11.
(2021·江苏·高三专题练习)假如你是两周前从电动车上摔下来并且右腿流血较多的高三学生李华,目前你已康复。你打算写一封感谢信给当时曾经帮助过你的某公司职员 David的经理M. Green,表达你对David的感激。 内容包括:
1.自我介绍,诚挚表达谢意
2.写明对方曾给与的具体帮助,提及自己得到对方帮助时的感受或所受益处 3.希望经理传达谢意给 David
注意:1.词数80字左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 Dear Mr. Green I’m Li Hua.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:One possible version: Dear Mr. Green,
I'm Li Hua, a lucky dog, who was helped by a clerk named David in your company a fortnight ago. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for his generous help. Without his kindness and timely first aid, I wouldn't have recovered so quickly.
I shall never forget the day when I fell off my electric bicycle and hurt my right leg seriously. It was David who helped me without hesitation. It deeply impressed me that your company possesses such a warm-hearted and heroic clerk, whose knowledge of first aid and quick action benefited me so much.
My true appreciation is beyond any words. I'll be more than pleased if you can convey my gratitude to your clerk, David. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给某公司经理M. Green写封信,感谢他的职员 David在你从电动车上摔下来的时候给与你的帮助。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时。 结构:三段式
第一段自我介绍并说明来信用意;第二段描述具体帮助过程;第三段请求代为转达谢意。。 要求:
1.自我介绍,诚挚表达谢意
2.写明对方曾给与的具体帮助,提及自己得到对方帮助时的感受或所受益处 3.希望经理传达谢意给 David
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
a lucky dog, sincere appreciation for, generous help, first aid, fall off, without hesitation, a warm-hearted and heroic clerk, more than pleased, convey gratitude to. 第三步:连词成句 I am a lucky dog.
I was helped by a clerk named David in your company a fortnight ago. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for his generous help. Without his kindness and timely first aid, I wouldn't have recovered so quickly.
I shall never forget the day when I fell off my electric bicycle and hurt my right leg seriously. David helped me without hesitation.
Your company possesses such a warm-hearted and heroic clerk.
David´s knowledge of first aid and quick action benefited me so much. I'll be more than pleased if you can convey my gratitude to your clerk.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 表因果、条件关系:Without , if
表修饰限定关系:who引导定语从句;when引导定语从句;whose引导定语从句
表强调:It was … that强调句
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,兼顾句式多样性。 【点睛】
[高分句型1] Without his kindness and timely first aid, I wouldn't have recovered so quickly.该句使用了虚拟语气,表达对过去情况的虚拟,也体现了David的帮助的重要性。
[高分句型2] It deeply impressed me that your company possesses such a warm-hearted and heroic clerk, whose knowledge of first aid and quick action benefited me so much.该句中It作形式主语,that引导主语从句,whose引导非限制性定语从句,先行词是clerk。
十二、北京冬残奥会与雪容融
12.北京冬残奥会正在进行,来自世界各国的运动员和观众想结束后参观中国的旅游胜地和名胜古迹。请你向他们介绍一处最具代表性的旅游胜地或名胜古迹。
注意:词数100左右。
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【答案】例文:Beijing is the capital of China, which is a famous tourist attraction. It is a modern city with a long history. It lies in the north of China. Millions of people from different parts of the world come to Beijing. They come here to taste the famous food—Beijing Roast Duck and visit the places of interest.
There are many places of interest. Take a bus, and you can get to the Great Wall, the Ming Tombs and the Tian’anmen Square. From them you can learn a lot about Chinese history. Of course, you can also visit the museums such as Museum of Chinese History, Beijing Museum of Natural History.
If you want to learn more about China, welcome to Beijing. 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向参加完北京冬奥会的来自世界各国的运动员和观众,介绍一处最具代表性的旅游胜地或名胜古迹以便其参观。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
位于:lie in→be located in 参观:visit→pay a visit to 到达:get to→reach
想要做某事:want to do sth.→feel like doing sth. 2.句式拓展 合并简单句
原句:It is a modern city with a long history. It lies in the north of China.
拓展句:Beijing is a modern city with a long history, which lies in the north of China. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】Beijing is the capital of China, which is a famous tourist attraction. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you want to learn more about China, welcome to Beijing. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
十三、推荐信
13.(2022·湖南·长沙一中高二期末)假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对体育很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你最喜欢的中国体育人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括: 1. 该人物是谁; 2. 该人物的主要贡献; 3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Jim,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文:Dear Jim, It’s great to hear from you. Knowing that you have a burning desire for sports and want to know my favourite sports figure in China, I’m writing to briefly introduce Lang Ping to you.
Lang Ping, recognized as the “Iron Hammer”, captained the Chinese women’s volleyball team for many years wholeheartedly, and is the
first person in volleyball to win Olympic gold medals both as a player and as a coach, bringing glory to our country. Faced with obstacles, she never abandoned hope. Her spirit of perseverance, bravery and putting the motherland first has greatly impacted me, encouraging me to be patient in adversity, and strengthening my confidence and national pride.
Interested in knowing more sports figures in China? I can find you some related materials! Just let me know.
Yours, Li Hua 【解析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Jim写信,介绍一位最喜欢的中国体育人物。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
想要做某事:want to do sth.=would like to do sth. 障碍:obstacle→barrier
鼓励某人做某事:encourage sb. to do sth.=inspire sb. to do sth. 相关的:related→relevant 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:Faced with obstacles, she never abandoned hope.
拓展句:When she was faced with obstacles, she never abandoned hope. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]
Knowing that you have a burning desire for sports and want to know my favourite sports figure in China, I’m writing to briefly introduce Lang Ping to you.(that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2]
Lang Ping, recognized as the “Iron Hammer”, captained the Chinese women’s volleyball team for many years wholeheartedly, and is the first person in volleyball to win Olympic gold medals both as a player and as a coach, bringing glory to our country.(recognized为过去分词作状语,bringing为现在分词作状语)
十四、人机关系 14.
(2021·陕西·高新一中模拟预测)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jenny正在做一份关于中国移动支付( mobile payment)的问卷调查( survey),你是她的重点采访对象,采访内容如下;请你就这些问题给她回一封邮件完成采访。 采访内容:
1.你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况; 2.移动支付带来的好处 3.你的看法。
参考词汇: 微信: Wechat 支付宝: Alipay 二维码: QR code 注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 Dear Jenny,
How is your survey on mobile payment going? __________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully
Li Hua
【答案】例文:Dear Jenny,
How is your survey on mobile payment going?I’m writing to inform you some specific relevant information and I’m delighted I can help with it.
It is universally acknowledged that China is the largest mobile payment market. China is more obvious in the cashless trend. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy, which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family. With
the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay. We hardly need to carry a wallet or cash at all. Additionally, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. To conclude, mobile payment has dramatically changed people’s life in China. In terms of me, I think mobile payment should be encouraged. It has won over consumers with its convenience. On the other hand, there are often discounts if you make mobile payment, as major online payment platforms are competing because they want to have more consumers use their service.
Hopefully, the explanation can be of great benefit to you. Wish you good luck. Yours faithfully Li Hua 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jenny回一封信完成关于中国移动支付的问卷调查采访。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
相关的:relevant→related
习惯于:be used to→be accustomed to 几乎不:hardly→rarely
就我而言:In terms of me→As far as I’m concerned/From my perspective/As for me 2.句式拓展 合并句子
原句:With the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay. We hardly need to carry a wallet or cash at all.
拓展句:With the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay so we hardly need to carry a wallet or cash at all. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】It is universally acknowledged that China is the largest mobile payment market. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从
句)
【高分句型2】Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy, which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
十五、当代青年与烦恼
15.(2021·吉林·东北师大附中高三阶段练习)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Take the stage, play our role 为题写一篇发言稿参赛。 内容包括:
1.选择一个近来发生的让人振奋的事件说起,让你联想到祖国发展,青年一代所要肩负的责任和使命。
2.结合自身,如何实践理想报效祖国。 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Take the stage, play our role
China
is
rising
on
the
world
stage
notably.
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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:Take the stage, play our role
China is rising on the world stage notably. We were very excited to hear the news that the Shenzhou-V carrying the 38-year-old astronaut Yang, lifted off on Wednesday at 9:00 a.m. at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre, Gansu Province. The success was exciting not only for all Chinese, but also for people around the world. That was an honor
of our great motherland and made me think about our responsibility. Someone may doubt that the young people have a little responsibility, but it's just the opposite. The young people are carrying too much responsibility. Well, I must say that we have a responsibility for ourselves. The contemporary young people are stressed out, and we have to work hard to make a living. As a student of us, so long as we choose study, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly. We have grown up with physical and mental health, and that is inseparable from all kinds of hardship parents endured. So we should not shirk any responsibility of love and care. 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以Take the stage, play our role为题写一篇发言稿参加英语演讲比赛。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累
激动的:excited→thrilled 责任:responsibility→duty 分不开的:inseparable→indivisible 承受:endure→bear 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:That was an honor of our great motherland and made me think about our responsibility.
拓展句:That was an honor of our great motherland, which made me think about our responsibility. 【点睛】
[高分句型1]We were very excited to hear the news that the Shenzhou-V carrying the 38-year-old astronaut Yang, lifted off on Wednesday at 9:00 a.m. at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre, Gansu Province.(运用了that引导的同位语从句,现在分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2]Someone may doubt that the young people have a little responsibility, but it's just the opposite.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
十六、疫情下的网课
16.(2022·上海·模拟预测)Directions: Write an English composition in I20-l50 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 由于新冠肺炎疫情的发生,国外学生也开始使用钉钉(DingTalk)软件进行在线学习,目前你的国外朋友Tom询问你如何使用其进行在线学习你学校开设的汉语课程。现在你给他回信,告诉他使用的方法及在线汉语课程的特色。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Dear Tom,
I have already received your letter and hope everything goes well with you.
As the outbreak of novel coronavirus, we have to stay at home instead of going to school. Fortunately, we are living in a high-tech era. An application called DingTalk acts as class temporarily. The using methods are simple and convenient. First of all, download this application, enter your class group, then click the button of “class online”, find the live telecast, and then you can learn the class online.
The course of Chinese language online has many advantages. Not only can you play again and again, but also you can pause and go back at any time if you don’t understand what teachers say. Compared with the traditional class, it is the most important unique skills. Besides, the teacher could put more interesting examples without worrying about time of class because we can speed up the class or skip the chapter we don’t need. How about your ideas?
Looking forward to your reply and feel free to contact me if you have further questions. Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是应用文。要求考生给国外朋友Tom回信,告诉他使用钉钉(DingTalk)软件的方法及在线汉语课程的特色。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
收到你的来信:receive your letter→hear from you 因为:as→because of
幸运的是:fortunately→luckily 方法:method→way
此外:Besides→what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:An application called DingTalk acts as class temporarily. 拓展句:An application which is called DingTalk acts as class temporarily. 【点睛】
[高分句型1]I have already received your letter and hope everything goes well with you.(由省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Not only can you play again and again, but also you can pause and go back at any time if you don’t understand what teachers say.(由Not only引导的部分倒装句,if引导的条件状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]Besides, the teacher could put more interesting examples without worrying about time of class because we can speed up the class or skip the chapter we don’t need.(由because引导的原因状语从句和省略连词that/which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型4]Looking forward to your reply and feel free to contact me if you have further questions.(由if引导的条件状语从句)
十七、2022年杭州亚运会
17.(2021·浙江·高二阶段练习)假如你是某高中的学生李华, 从海报上得知杭州正在招募亚运会(the Hangzhou Asian Games)志愿者。你有意申请成为其中的一员。请按照下列提示, 写一份申请书。 要点:1.写信目的 2.能提供相应服务和帮助
3.曾是G20杭州峰会志愿者;(G20 Hangzhou Summit) 注意1.词数80左右
2.可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that you're recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games, I'm writing to apply for a position for the following reasons. As a Hangzhou native, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games. Outgoing and warm-hearted personalities combined with a good command of English will contribute to smooth communication with foreigners. Most importantly, having worked as a volunteer for G20 Hangzhou Summit, I've gained abundant experience, which makes me more qualified.
With the purpose of promoting friendship among people from different backgrounds, I'm looking forward to your favorable consideration of my application. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是李华,2022年杭州将举办亚运会,你从网
上得知杭州亚运会组委会(Hangzhou Asian Games Organ zing Committee)正在招募志愿者。请考生给组委会写一封信,申请成为志愿者。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
申请:apply for → ask for 熟悉的:familiar→ well-informed 参加:participate in→ take part in 有助于:contribute to→ be conducive to 句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:As a Hangzhou native, I am familiar with the local conditions. 拓展句:Because I’ m a Hangzhou native, I am familiar with the local conditions. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that you're recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games, I'm writing to apply for a position for the following reasons. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Most importantly, having worked as a volunteer for Olympics, I've gained abundant experience, which makes me more qualified.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
十八、志愿服务让青春“闪光”
18.(2021·上海市松江二中高二期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 150-180 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
校园报本期开设了志愿者故事专栏,正在向同学们征稿,请分享你的志愿者经历或故事,并谈谈收获与感悟。
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:
Everyone has an unforgettable experience. My most memorable was the first time to volunteer at the Happiness Nursing Home last summer holiday.
As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers brought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too. How happy they were! Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, some of us performed activities for them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspaper for them. Some of us chatted with them. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.
From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them. In our daily life, we should offer our seats to them on buses. And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly. 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生分享自己的志愿者经历或故事,并谈谈收获与感悟。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
假期:holiday →vacation 到达:arrive at → get to/reach 例如:such as →for example 照顾:care for→ look after 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:I got up early because I was too excited to sleep.
拓展句:I got up early because I was so excited that I couldn’t sleep.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
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